The Exit Exam

Fall 2004 AnchorSet, 2-2 Essay

Topic: A place to get a good meal at a fair price

A place to get a good meal at a fair price is McDonalds. McDonalds, has a great menue, where they offer variety of meals for adults and children. First their aduld menue, has a selection of hamburgers, salads, and chicken sandwiches that can be purchached for under five dollars. For example; a big mac meel, comes with a hamburger made with patty's, lettuce a special sauce, medium fries and a medium drink. All for just five doller and ten cent.

If you don't like hamburgers, you can choose a chicken sandwich, made with real Chicken breast, two golden patty's medium fries and drink at the same price.

McDonalds, also offer a great salad menue, for individuals who wants to eat healthy. Their salad menue, has four different type of salad that you can choose from. Another example is their chicken cesor salad made with lettuce, tomatos, parmesan cheese and with fried chicken or grilled chicken strips, and a cesar dressing. Or you can choose their ranch back salad, also made with fresh lettuce and a sprickle of bacon bites. All of their salads are under five dollars. After eating all of this food you mint want to save room for desert. They have a desert menue where you can, choose from different flavor milk Shake and drinks, such as vanilla, straberry, and chocolate.

Secondly, Mcdonald has a great kids menue. Children five and under can choose a cheese burger or chicken nuggest happy meals. Each of these meal come with a toy french fries and a drink. Children six and up can choose from their mighty kids menue, wich consist of Double hamburger or cheeseburger, milk Shake, and fries all for just four dollars and eightyfive cent. With all of their meals under five dollars. Mcdonals did the impossible when they introduced their dollar menue. In their dollar menue you can choose from a spicy chicken sandwich, chicken nuggest, french fries, and hamburger all for just one dollar each. A further Example is, yesterday my sister and I drove up to their drivethru-window. With two dollar and twenty cent in our pockts. We ordered, two spicy chicken and two glass of water. All it cost was just two dollar and fourteen cent.

As you can see going to mcdonalds can be a great choice, that can truly satisfie you're taste. With all of the meals that they offer. From their hamburger mean, chicken sandwich meal. Or ther Salad and desert thet you can choose from. Both parents and kids can enjoy, lunch or dinner together peacfully. It can also benefit you financially, with so many other restauraund in the market offering the same quality of food that McDonalds offer at a higher price. Mcdonald should be you're number one choice for a place that you can enjoy a good meal at a fair price.

Comments:

[ Grade 2-2 (474w) This essay suffers from both organizational weaknesses and grammatical inconsistencies. Although the details and the examples are sufficient, those details are not tied to the overall prompt. "Good meal" and "fair price" are the two key words in the prompt, and the writer seems to get caught up in the description of the meals themselves without relating them back to the purpose of the paper: "why" or "how' are the meals good and fairly priced? When read, the focus appears to be on the menu, not on "goodness" or "pricing."

In addition, there are consistent and numerous spelling errors. When spelling errors appear in almost every sentence, they cannot help but call attention to themselves. There are also several verb errors, but nearly not as numerous as the spelling errors. ]